Just I can say WOW!!! You do know how to show your opinions strongly. Some given points of view about why we should write in Spanish first make me think that we have to practice writing a lot.
Regarding to this point, I'd like to say that I have checked your essays. There are some points that I'd like you to take into consideration. In my poor experience as an English teacher, I have learnt that there are some types of essays and one of them is discoursive. In a good web site -that I don't remember now- said that essays should be written in third person and we have to avoid contractions. It means that the opinions that are given in it shouldn't start with "I think", "It's my opinion that", etc. We could say: it has been shown, it has been demonstrated, etc.
There are 2 students who haven´t handed in their drafts yet: Luis and Rebeca. I will wait for you tomorrow in the teacher's room during the second recess. The topic is about Social Nets.
On the other hand, there are some students who need to repeat their essays or finish them, and there is a group that are ready to be posted in this blog. I will be very happy to see them here. You can upload pictures in relation to the topic we have worked.
Well, there is no more to say for now. The last thing I´d like to ask you is you should check this blog very often.
See you on Monday,
Paola M.
Social nets
ResponderEliminarMany people use social nets every day. Because they are very popular, they are every where and the modern lifestyle requires of them for comunication or even to work.
Using social nets helps for job and school purposes. Other advantages of them is the easy comunication with friend o family.
On the other hand, the social nets have many disadvantages, for example many people fall in love with unknown persons. Also the lonely people use them to escape from their problems and then the social nets could become a problem if they are not used properly.
To sum up, there are many advantages and disadvanteges to social nets. I belive that it is a good thing if they are used with responsability.
Gustavo Andrade
Oh it was here... okay then...
ResponderEliminarSocial nets
Lons time ago the internet was created and every day new web sites re made and more people entered to this invention. More often by the teeneagers, who domain the internet´s web site for doing homework, meting people and spending some time on it. One of the most visited web sites in the entire world and by almost every person are the social net.
The most common social net is facebokk created by Mark Zuckerberg. This social net was got everything that teens want, like share music or photos, post a comment on many groups, chat with someone who you haven´t seen it for a long time and have a lot of time enjoying the social video games.
But not everything is good on the social net, there are a lot of disadventages on this web site because of the bad people who have acces to. One of the most common problem of these persons, it´s than they lie at the teenagers just for hurting them or in some cases steal them in their house because those teeneager say everything to everyone making a several security problem to themself and their´s families.
To sum it up, there are many advantages and disadvanteges to this social net and everything depens on the person who use it. Obviously If someone do not moderate the use of these web sites the disadvanteges becomes more dangerous, thats why everybody, inclouding old mans and kids, must to know how to use this page correctly.
By Xavier Idrovo
Social Nets!
ResponderEliminarFor me, social nets have a big importance in the present because we can comunicate with other people in those social networks like in My Space, Facebook Twitter, etc.
The social nets have advantages and disadvantages. One of the advantages is that we know social events in the world,share pretty moments with our family and friends through photos, go or hold events, etc. Some people used to informate their relationships.
The disadvantages are that it can be dangerous if the private don't configurate correctly because we expose our private life.
So, it is clear that everything in excess is bad. We must be careful in the social networks: put a limit of time because probably it become an addiction
Patricia Castillo